08-05-2008, 04:06 AM
(part 1) Mommy Dearest written by Nerveexplosion
Valerie was sitting down on the sofa watching TV and talking on the phone with her ex boy friend. She was a slim high-school senior, 5 8' 33c's and a teacher's daughter. Any way as she sat on the couch talking to her ex, unbeknownst to her, her mother was listening in on the other end. Mrs. Saunders's reputation in school had been tarnished by her daughter's choice for a boy friend. Danny was a 19yr old junior failing most his classes and was a well-known pothead. No one really knew why Mrs. Saunders allowed Valerie to date the idiot in the first place but many rumors had been going around school about what they had been doing together.
Any way, Mrs. Saunders had been drinking that night trying to forget about the whole thing when she heard the phone ring and heard Valerie answer the phone and say "sup Danny". Saunders immediately picked up the phone and listened in on the conversation. Eventually Valerie and Danny began talking about the rumors that were being spread around the school. In Mrs. Saunders's altered state she wasn't able to understand that they were talking about rumors and not what they had actually done. Mrs. Saunders was infuriated. She slammed down the phone and ran out of her room into the living room where Valerie had just hung up once she heard her mom slam down the other phone.
She tried to explain "Mom it's not what you thin..." Whack, a hard slap to the face sent Valerie crashing to the floor. Mrs. Saunders picked her up and slammed her against the wall knocking the breath out of the pretty young girl. "Damn it!! I told you to stay way from him!" Whack, another slap to the face. Then a backhand, splitting her lip and sending blood flying.
"Mom please!" Valerie screamed. The plea fell on deaf ears as Mrs. Saunders sent a right hand into her daughter's gut. "UUUGH!!" Her stomach muscles weren't tensed not expecting her own mother to continue the onslaught. "AUUUGH!" "OOOOF!" 2 more shots thudded into the pit of her stomach.
Valerie's knees were growing weak and she couldn't get any air into her body. Again Mrs. Saunders wailed in a drunken rage, "WHY?!?!?! You ruined me!!" She then sent a knee that started below the navel and traveled up to her daughter's solar plexus. Valerie's feet left the floor the moment of impact. "AUUUGHGH..." she sputtered. Choking low guttural sounds as she hung like a slab of raw meat on her mother's knee.
Mrs. Saunders backed away and let her daughter drop to the ground. Her rage was fulfilled. She was back in our realm of reality. She looked at her daughter writhing on the floor. Blood seeping out of her mouth. She realized what she had done and bolted. Valerie was found about a half-hour later by a friend who had come to visit. They took her to the hospital where she stayed for 4 days. Mrs. Saunders as never seen again.'
Valerie was sitting down on the sofa watching TV and talking on the phone with her ex boy friend. She was a slim high-school senior, 5 8' 33c's and a teacher's daughter. Any way as she sat on the couch talking to her ex, unbeknownst to her, her mother was listening in on the other end. Mrs. Saunders's reputation in school had been tarnished by her daughter's choice for a boy friend. Danny was a 19yr old junior failing most his classes and was a well-known pothead. No one really knew why Mrs. Saunders allowed Valerie to date the idiot in the first place but many rumors had been going around school about what they had been doing together.
Any way, Mrs. Saunders had been drinking that night trying to forget about the whole thing when she heard the phone ring and heard Valerie answer the phone and say "sup Danny". Saunders immediately picked up the phone and listened in on the conversation. Eventually Valerie and Danny began talking about the rumors that were being spread around the school. In Mrs. Saunders's altered state she wasn't able to understand that they were talking about rumors and not what they had actually done. Mrs. Saunders was infuriated. She slammed down the phone and ran out of her room into the living room where Valerie had just hung up once she heard her mom slam down the other phone.
She tried to explain "Mom it's not what you thin..." Whack, a hard slap to the face sent Valerie crashing to the floor. Mrs. Saunders picked her up and slammed her against the wall knocking the breath out of the pretty young girl. "Damn it!! I told you to stay way from him!" Whack, another slap to the face. Then a backhand, splitting her lip and sending blood flying.
"Mom please!" Valerie screamed. The plea fell on deaf ears as Mrs. Saunders sent a right hand into her daughter's gut. "UUUGH!!" Her stomach muscles weren't tensed not expecting her own mother to continue the onslaught. "AUUUGH!" "OOOOF!" 2 more shots thudded into the pit of her stomach.
Valerie's knees were growing weak and she couldn't get any air into her body. Again Mrs. Saunders wailed in a drunken rage, "WHY?!?!?! You ruined me!!" She then sent a knee that started below the navel and traveled up to her daughter's solar plexus. Valerie's feet left the floor the moment of impact. "AUUUGHGH..." she sputtered. Choking low guttural sounds as she hung like a slab of raw meat on her mother's knee.
Mrs. Saunders backed away and let her daughter drop to the ground. Her rage was fulfilled. She was back in our realm of reality. She looked at her daughter writhing on the floor. Blood seeping out of her mouth. She realized what she had done and bolted. Valerie was found about a half-hour later by a friend who had come to visit. They took her to the hospital where she stayed for 4 days. Mrs. Saunders as never seen again.'