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(part 10) End Game written by Nerveexplosion

"She's waking up." Those were the first words Valerie heard as she came to. "That was quite a crash you were in." Valerie just nodded as she took in her surroundings. She knew she was in a hospital but still didn't know exactly where she was. She turned to her side, grimacing form the pain it caused her, and noticed that there was a newspaper on the lamp table next to her, The Chicago Sun Times, good she was still in Chicago. On the front page was an article about four cops and another man who had been killed the night before. She flipped to the local news section and as she began to read the article the nurse said, "that was quite a crash you were in couple nights ago. I figured you might want to read up on just what happened. You are a very lucky lady." Valerie just responded with a nod and continued reading the article. "Who got the others?" she thought to her self while she finished reading the article.

She put the paper back down on the table next to her bed and tried to straighten up only to find that almost any movement caused her intense pain in her stomach. "Just how lucky was I, I can barely move" she thought to her self while asking the nurse when she would be able to leave the hospital. The nurse went on to explain that she was operated on almost immediately after getting to the hospital for internal bleeding they thought was from the accident. She also had 2 cracked ribs and a mild concussion. The doctors all thought the injuries must have come while the car was flipping since they had found her to be going around 55 when it happened. Finally the nurse informed her that she would be able to leave the hospital after about a week of tests to make sure nothing else was wrong with her.

Just as the nurse finished explaining to Valerie when it was she would be able to leave the hospital two men in long trench jackets entered the room. The nurse was just about to stop them when the first one in the room showed her his badge. "OH SHIT!" was the first thing Valerie could think of. Mabey they had found out what was going, they could be more of Hank's men, or worst. The car she had crashed in was stolen, Hank's actually, and who knew what else the cops could get from that. Especially when four of their own were dead and knowing from experience she knew they would be willing to pin it on any one. As the two approached her bed Valerie tensed, unable to control the dread she was feeling.

"Hi, glad to see you're awake and well, I am Detective Robert Johnson and the fella to your left is my partner Caesar Vargas. We're here to ask you a couple a' questions about the incident two nights ago", he said as he first motioned towards his partner then at the front page of the paper on the table. They asked her about Hank, what they were doing that night, where they were going, and if she remembered anything after the crash. The first thing she felt was relief, they didn't know anything yet, and if she could just come up with some believable answers they wouldn't know any thing. She told them that she had just started seeing Hank that they had gone out on the town and were on their back to town when Hank noticed that some one had been tailing them. He turned off of the road home and just started making turned wherever he could trying to get away from the car that was tailing them. After a while they caught up and ran them off the road that was all she could remember. The two detectives bought the story like it was a Barry Bonds rookie card and left the room shortly afterwards. Again she felt relief, it was over.

At weeks end Valerie left the hospital and took a taxi back to the apartment complex where she had dealt with John and James (see desert eagle (part 6) for info) and was glad to see that her car was still there. It was keyed up a little and the front passenger side tire was low on air but other than that it was fine. She drove to the autozone a few blocks from the complex and to her surprise found yet more luck. Her purse was still under the driver's seat but when she opened it she saw she only had 25 dollars left. Just as she was getting ready to put on the spare and go home she saw a familiar face approaching. It was Detective Caesar Vargas. "Need some help?" he asked as he approached. "Not really", she murmured back not wanting help even though she could barely bend over to get the jack under the car. "I'll tell you what", he said, " I'll pay for a new tire and have them install it. Technically, it would be them helping you not me." She laughed and agreed to the deal. Later that night they had dinner together before Valerie let him know that she had to get back home to get ready for school, being as it started August and it was already late July. They had already hit it off though, so when Caesar asked for her phone number she complied and gave it to him. She then kissed him good night and began the long drive home.

When she finally got back home she walked gingerly into her house, her whole torso filled with pain with her every move, it would be a while before she could hunt down the last one left from west Pointe. She had almost gotten her self killed, but she still hungered for the revenge the school had denied her. Five down One to go she thought to herself before going to sleep that night, one more.

Several months had passed, it was late July when she got back home from Chicago, it was now midway through December and she was now ready to get back to work. She was hungrier than ever for revenge after thinking about night and day while her body healed and she got back into shape, and now that Christmas break was approaching it would be her opportunity. She had done her research throughout the school year and also got some help from Caesar [ see end game (part 10) (1 of 2) ] since he was a detective he could get more info than she could. She played it off like he was an old friend so he never grew suspicious and helped her figure out where he was. They pin pointed #6's, David Gonzales, location to New Jersey. Soon she would be taking the final step to coming full circle. She had no past record so she knew his mysterious death would not warrant any suspicions about her, especially while she was dating a detective.

They day finally arrived. And she was well prepared. While her job as guidance counselor didn't make her rich she HAD saved a little for stash for this occasion. On December 20th she arrived at New Jersey International airport. She went to the car rental part of the airport and looked around for the fastest car she could find. She had to get out QUICK if shit hit the fan so she rented a Porsche 911 turbo. 448 horses and 198 mile an hour top speed sounded good enough. Support that with a 0-60 time that's faster than you could read that last sentence and all wheels drive and it was exactly what she was looking for. She stepped into the car pulled out and headed for a Hotel near Atlantic City where she had already reserved a room for 6 nights so she could do some recon before doing the hit.

On the 22nd she saw him for the first time. Ever heard of the phrase money doesn't grow on trees? Well that's because this guy picked em all. Apparently he had only gone to West Pointe as a disciplinary thing cause there was no way this guy got that much money in so little time on his own. It had to be inherited or something. She watched from afar as his 2003 Lexus pulled up to one of the many casinos lining the strip. Just as he got out of the car two other men, BIG MEN, got out of the car with him. "Damn it", she thought to her self, "body guards". She walked back to where her car was parked and opened the trunk. Inside was another expensive form fitting dress. She slipped into in and then drove up to the casino.

Once inside she began looking for David, which didn't take long. She followed the clapping and hollering to the craps table where David was already raking in money. She fought through the crowd and snuck up next to him. "Hi, I'm Jessica", she whispered in his ear as his bodyguards started approaching. "Don't worry it's cool", was his reply as he motioned for his guards to back off. As soon as they had backed off they started talking again. It didn't take very long for Valerie to work her charms on him and 15 minutes later they were leaving the craps table and on their way to eat dinner. At dinner it was more of the same and soon after that he invited her to his house.

When they arrived she saw just how much money this guy had to have. The house was a huge 2-story building with what looked like endless rooms. Inside the house he showed her his entertainment center, game room, and then the pool. She stayed at his house for a couple of hours before saying that she had to go home. She knew where he lived now, so there was no reason for her to stay any longer.

She planned for the 24th to be the night she would do him in on. She had set up another dinner date with him and was sure she would get invited to his house again. He picked her up from her hotel at 7:00 and they were at his house by 10:00. She'd been throwing herself at him all night so when he asked her if she wanted to jump in the Jacuzzi she wasn't surprised. She went to the bathroom with her bag. She had come prepared for this knowing from her last visit that he had a pool and a Jacuzzi. So she slipped into her bikini, She looked at herself in the mirror, she was 5 '9 slim with a slight six pack, perfectly proportioned every where else, and placed the garrote under a small wristband on her left wrist.

Valerie got out of the bathroom and headed towards the Jacuzzi. There were a couple of plates with different fruits and champagne waiting for her. They had been in the Jacuzzi for about 15 minutes when Valerie decided it was time to end it. She moved from in front of him to behind and started massaging his back while slipping the garrote out from under her wristband. Then she struck wrapping it around his neck. He was just about out when she heard a familiar voice say, "just what do you think your doing Valerie?" She looked up to see Caesar pointing his beretta 92 f at her "what the f**k?!?!?" was the first thought that entered her mind. Holding the garrote with just one hand now she started blindly reaching back for the fruit plate trying to distract Caesar at the same time. "What are you doing here?" she asked. Her replied with, "don't worry about it. All you need to know is that I know who and what you are. And you aren't getting away with this. You are gonna make my career."

Just as he finished his sentence Valerie was finally able to grab the knife she'd been trying to find the whole time. She grabbed it and flung it at Caesar sticking it 2 inches deep into his arm cause him to drop his gun. She jumped out of the Jacuzzi and charged him. She swung first with a left hook then a straight right to his face staggering him. She followed it up with right hook followed by a backhand right knocking him back into the wall. She grabbed the knife and yanked it out of his arm then went for his neck with it.

He brought up his forearm just in time to block the blow then hit her in the middle of her stomach with his right. "Auugh!" She grunted, the blow wasn't strong enough to wind her but it still hurt like hell, she tried the swing back but he caught her fist in his hand. Know he had the power advantage he slammed her into the wall as hard as he could effectively winding her. He let go of her wrist as she just stood there in a daze. He unleashed with a furious combo to her mid section first a straight right to the middle of her stomach, then a left and a right hook towards her obliques. "OOUUUGH!" was all she could say as Caesar's fists kept pounding at her insides. The punches still wearn't sinking in very deep but they were winding her more and more as Caesar kept launching them. She started slumping over so he grabbed her by the hair and straightened her out. Once he she was more or less standing straight up he again started launching fists into her. "AAAAUUGH!!" "OOOF!!" Two uppercuts just below her breasts sunk in deep driving the air form her lungs. Tiring of this rhetoric he nailed her with a backhand to the face sending her to the floor on her knees, hands at her sides. With her in this position he couldn't resist kicking as hard as he could in the center of her stomach lifting her off the ground and sending her on her back. A loud "AAAAAAUUUGGHH!!!!!!!" sound escaped her lips as his foot connected then she just lay there on her back clutching at her stomach moaning and gasping for air.

Sure that Valerie would be out of it for a while he ran over to where David was and asked him if he was all right. David said he was so he briefly told him who she was soon after that he turned his attention back to Valerie. IT had been a good 2 minutes but Valerie was still on the ground, on her side now. Caesar walked over and stood her up he turned her around and started cuffing her when Valerie lunged at him knocking them both to the floor with her landing on top. That's when Valerie started wailing on him. Lefts and rights raining down all over Caesar's face. After about six blows he was finally able to push her off of him. They were both standing now and Caesar struck first now launching an overhead right that Valerie easily ducked under. She retaliated with a swift kick to Caesar's chin and followed it up with a roundhouse kick to his temple knocking him to the floor.

She could hear foot steps behind her just as Caesar hit the floor so she blindly threw a back handed fist in the other direction which struck David right on the forehead. She grabbed him and launched a knee right to his nose with a loud CRRRRACK! As he was getting back up she went at him with the same round house kick she used to take down Caesar. She went for it but he ducked countered by ducking under it and hooking her leg at her knee. From this position he picked her up and slammed her on the floor. She was dazed form the slam so she wasn't prepared for the knee drop to her stomach. David wasn't a particularly big guy but 190 pounds dropping on your stomach CAN'T feel very good. She jackknifed up from the floor and folded around his knee before falling back to the ground. He picked her up by her hair and set her back to the same wall where she had been a few minutes earlier. "Bitch!! You broke my f**king nose!!!" he screamed as he blasted past her now weak abs with a straight right fist just above her belly button. "AAAAAAAUUUUGGGHH!!!" she screamed, the next punch was worst, right at her solarplexus again blasting through her defenses. He held his fist there for a full 5 count before trying to ram it in deeper. Drool and Vomit spewed from her mouth while David continued to put pressure eon her stomach. Again she fell to the floor on her side. Choking and gasping desperately trying to fill her body with the air that had been so viciously pounded out of her.

She could barely keep her eyes open as she started trying to crawl back to where the knife was on the ground. She was just about there when Caesar picked it up. "Awe, looking for this toots?" he taunted. David walked over to her and picked her up from the ground. "Ok man, end this." her barked to Caesar. He held her arms behind her back while Caesar got closer, but again they had underestimated her resiliency. She managed to get her leg up high enough to kick Caesar in the nuts which distracted David enough so that she was able to get her legs under her and ram him into the wall. He let go of her so she turned around with another backhand to his face. She followed it up as he fell to his knees ramming her knee into his face 6 straight times before he finally fell on all fours.

She walked back over to Caesar who was still trying to recover and grabbed his wrist with her left while punching him with her right. After five or six blows she got behind him and...CRRRRRRUUUUUUUUNCH!! He fell to the floor with his head at an impossible angle, his neck snapped. David was up and staggering her way but she wasn't worried. She had the upper hand now. She took the knife in her left hand punched David twice with her right then jabbed the knife into his stomach and tore upwards. Then she slit his throat to finish him off. She went to the bathroom and washed off the blood from the battle and got her things. She was finally done she thought to herself, her mission her was complete. She made her way through the house and opened the front door, which was when it hit her. The lights were so bright she could barely see. 12 NJPD vehicles with their highbeams on waiting for her. She turned and made a mad dash for the fence then two shots went off, and Valerie hit the floor.

THE END??
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