08-06-2008, 01:07 AM
Payback (part 1) written by Stomachpuncher
This is a story that happened to my friend when I was there not to long ago. I have only exaggerated some parts of the story to make it more interesting, but besides that the rest is true!
Enjoy the story
At Transcona Collegiate High School (TCHS), It was like any other high school. There are cool groups and 'geek' groups and all that sort of thing.
Me and my friend John are part of a so-called cool group, which makes it easy to pass through school with out worrying about being always being insulted or thrown eggs at, etc, etc. like the geeks (sorry for using this term if it offends anyone, it only means 'outcasts') have to. One little problem
was that a group of two girls (who are part of a major smoking group) always insult my friend John, especially in Phys. Ed, the class they shared with him (and me).
The names of these two girls are Amanda and Jessie. Amanda is a real hot girl, if she weren't such a bitch I would like her more. She has long blonde
hair that she leaves down, her skin is a pale color, and she is about 5' 5". She has a nice flat concave stomach that curves in at her hips and
curves out to a bulge where her ribs jut out a bit. In between there her stomach is flat and perfect and her navel is a deep innie. The rest of her body has a feminine look. Most of the time she wears a tight belly shirt, showing off her abdomen's figure, tight blue jeans doing the same, and a grey hoody that she leaves unzipped showing her belly shirt. Jessie's body is kind of more pudgy and round and follows Amanda and joins in what she says and does.
Anyway, this is how the story goes:
One ugly Monday, the day everyone is miserable because we have a whole week left of crappy school or work until the weekend. Today was one of mine and John's bad days. We got bitched at and sent out of a classroom, the canteen closed when we need to get food to eat for lunch, and so on and so. Than the last class came, Phys. Ed.
Me and John were pissed off enough, but someone in the class had to just push it. The class was playing floor hockey and John was the goalie for our team because he was extremely good at blocking shots. So was I, so I took position of being his defense. The game went on, and our team was winning but from there is when the biggest mistake occurred. Amanda and her follower Jessie started insulting John and making fun of him, calling
him all sorts of names and types of diseases (I won't say here) that really pissed him off and distracted him from the game. Because of this, they other team scored several goals on us and were winning. The girls kept on going on, giggling and shouting out names at him. I was pissed off too, but when I looked behind me at John, I saw his pure red face filled with hate and anger, and he was squeezing his hands so tight they were turning all white (lol, I rhymed). He looked like he could explode!
We than lost the game and he was really, really pissed off. After we helped put away the floor hockey stuff, John walked over to Amanda, and I was right behind him. I heard Amanda say "Hey, look, here comes hemorrhoid boy" and she started laughing as John approached her. She looked into his eyes and saw an evil, murderous look, then her laughter gradually dropped. He looked back at her seeing her with her hands behind her back while leaning against the bleachers. He looked down at her wide-open flat concave stomach.
Then without thinking, he clutched his hand into a fist and threw it at her stomach, punching it into her upper stomach, right where her stomach starts to curve out, 3-4 inches above her innie bellybutton. His fist sank deep into her unexpected stomach, past her stomach flesh, past her muscle, finally deeper into her upper abdomen. He shoves his fist even farther into her warm flat stomach, feeling several of her internal organs get pushed out of the
way and then he curves his fist under her ribs causing them to jut out more. She looked back at him in disbelief in her wide eyes, and her mouth wide open without anything coming out. For about 10 seconds her body rests on his fist that is implanted into her stomach.
Once he takes his fist out of her warm stomach, she makes an "uuuulllllllggggggg" sound and falls on one knee, and with one hand on the ground, the other holding her stomach, facing the ground and breathing in deeply. John then just turns around and leaves the gym. I follow him out, but I look behind us at Amanda, aroused to what just happened and also I see Jessie standing over Amanda starring at us in disbelief as well. Now I don't think she'll be bothering John again, and if she does, she'll pay the price!!
This is a story that happened to my friend when I was there not to long ago. I have only exaggerated some parts of the story to make it more interesting, but besides that the rest is true!
Enjoy the story

At Transcona Collegiate High School (TCHS), It was like any other high school. There are cool groups and 'geek' groups and all that sort of thing.
Me and my friend John are part of a so-called cool group, which makes it easy to pass through school with out worrying about being always being insulted or thrown eggs at, etc, etc. like the geeks (sorry for using this term if it offends anyone, it only means 'outcasts') have to. One little problem
was that a group of two girls (who are part of a major smoking group) always insult my friend John, especially in Phys. Ed, the class they shared with him (and me).
The names of these two girls are Amanda and Jessie. Amanda is a real hot girl, if she weren't such a bitch I would like her more. She has long blonde
hair that she leaves down, her skin is a pale color, and she is about 5' 5". She has a nice flat concave stomach that curves in at her hips and
curves out to a bulge where her ribs jut out a bit. In between there her stomach is flat and perfect and her navel is a deep innie. The rest of her body has a feminine look. Most of the time she wears a tight belly shirt, showing off her abdomen's figure, tight blue jeans doing the same, and a grey hoody that she leaves unzipped showing her belly shirt. Jessie's body is kind of more pudgy and round and follows Amanda and joins in what she says and does.
Anyway, this is how the story goes:
One ugly Monday, the day everyone is miserable because we have a whole week left of crappy school or work until the weekend. Today was one of mine and John's bad days. We got bitched at and sent out of a classroom, the canteen closed when we need to get food to eat for lunch, and so on and so. Than the last class came, Phys. Ed.
Me and John were pissed off enough, but someone in the class had to just push it. The class was playing floor hockey and John was the goalie for our team because he was extremely good at blocking shots. So was I, so I took position of being his defense. The game went on, and our team was winning but from there is when the biggest mistake occurred. Amanda and her follower Jessie started insulting John and making fun of him, calling
him all sorts of names and types of diseases (I won't say here) that really pissed him off and distracted him from the game. Because of this, they other team scored several goals on us and were winning. The girls kept on going on, giggling and shouting out names at him. I was pissed off too, but when I looked behind me at John, I saw his pure red face filled with hate and anger, and he was squeezing his hands so tight they were turning all white (lol, I rhymed). He looked like he could explode!
We than lost the game and he was really, really pissed off. After we helped put away the floor hockey stuff, John walked over to Amanda, and I was right behind him. I heard Amanda say "Hey, look, here comes hemorrhoid boy" and she started laughing as John approached her. She looked into his eyes and saw an evil, murderous look, then her laughter gradually dropped. He looked back at her seeing her with her hands behind her back while leaning against the bleachers. He looked down at her wide-open flat concave stomach.
Then without thinking, he clutched his hand into a fist and threw it at her stomach, punching it into her upper stomach, right where her stomach starts to curve out, 3-4 inches above her innie bellybutton. His fist sank deep into her unexpected stomach, past her stomach flesh, past her muscle, finally deeper into her upper abdomen. He shoves his fist even farther into her warm flat stomach, feeling several of her internal organs get pushed out of the
way and then he curves his fist under her ribs causing them to jut out more. She looked back at him in disbelief in her wide eyes, and her mouth wide open without anything coming out. For about 10 seconds her body rests on his fist that is implanted into her stomach.
Once he takes his fist out of her warm stomach, she makes an "uuuulllllllggggggg" sound and falls on one knee, and with one hand on the ground, the other holding her stomach, facing the ground and breathing in deeply. John then just turns around and leaves the gym. I follow him out, but I look behind us at Amanda, aroused to what just happened and also I see Jessie standing over Amanda starring at us in disbelief as well. Now I don't think she'll be bothering John again, and if she does, she'll pay the price!!