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Carmen and Debbi written by Adam

...you've had it with those people. MAN! THEY REALLY SUCK!! You storm out of the house just to get away for a while. Not really sure where you're headed, just need to be away from that stupid computer! You drive aimlessly for a while then finally decide to stop for drink and maybe dinner...but DEFINATELY a drink! There's a little mexican place you like. It's kind of off-the-beaten-path and not too far from where you are now. You park around the back and walk in.

The place is nearly empty...Good! You're not in a very social mood anyway. You sit down and the waitress brings you a menu and asks if you'd like a drink. You tell her what you want and as she turns to leave she reaches up to fix the tie that's holding her hair. You get a brief view of her soft brown belly and her deep innie belly button. She saunters off, rolling her ample hips as only latin women can. You watch her go up to the bar to get your drink, still fixing her hair. You keep watching, mesmerized by her. Then you get an added pleasure as a couple of busboys walk past her. One and then the other throws a medium strength punch into her exposed stomach...ooof!...uuuggn! She groans as each of their fists sink into her exposed belly, one right in her perfect navel and the other just below it. She pretends to glair at the two teenagers who grin and keep walking, but she never lowers her hands. You get the impression that they play this little game often. She looks over and notices that you were watching her little exchange, and smiles at you unashamed. She brings your drink,and offers"they're my brothers" and then takes the seat opposite you."

I'm Carmen" she says extending her hand. You take it and introduce yourself. "You seemed to enjoy my little show over there." You notice that it was a statement not a question. "Most folks cringe or look away when they give me a shot in the stomach, but not you." "Do you like that sort of thing?" It's hard for you to deny a direct question, so you reluctantly admit that you do.

"Your belly looks pretty soft, ever been punched?" You're surprised and a little aroused by her bluntness, but you do fess up that you have. "By a guy or a girl?" "Guys mostly" you admit. Then you add "it's hard to find a girl who's interested. " She leans towards you and pokes her finger into your belly and says with a grin,"so what are you gonna do now that you have?" You try to hide your surprise, but her widening grin tells you that you failed. Then you both laugh. She sits with you and you talk while you eat. When you're finished she says "don't worry about the bill it's my treat...well actually it's my brother Enriche's since he owns the place."

"So, you wanna go back to my place so we can finish what we started?" She says this as she takes your hand and leads you out the back door. You walk to a little house that sits behind the restaurant "I live here, pretty convenient huh?" She opens the door and flicks on the light and lets you in. As you walk in Carmen casually asks "do you want to give or receive?" You start removing your jacket while you think and OOOOUFF! She sinks her fist into your soft lower belly. "I forgot...home field advantage."

You double over in pain, but your arms are trapped in your jacket! Smiling, Carmen throws an uppercut into your vulnerable stomach. UUUUUGGN! As you begin to sink to your knees she grabs both of your shoulders and pulls you back up as she drives her knee into your weak lower belly...OOOOOUUUUFFF!!! Now you fall to your knees gasping in agony. "I was right. You've got the softest belly I've ever punched."

Carmen pulls your jacket the rest of the way off and allows you a few minutes to hold your aching belly and catch your breath. you're still on your knees with your arms wrapped around your aching belly groaning as Carmen saunters back over to you. "My my Deb,but I really do loooove to sink my fist into that soft belly of yours." She casually reaches down and grabs your hair with both hands and tries to pul you up. She's completely unprepared when you stand up when she pulls you. Your fist buries itself in her soft brown belly in a perfect uppercut...OOOOOOOUUUUULLLFF!!! your fist meets no resistance as it sinks deep into Carmen's beautiful soft stomach. As she drops to her knees you catch her wrists and hold them up. Her exposed belly sags towards you, almost like she was offering it to you. You kick her hard, right in the belly.

UUNNNNNNNGG!!! That felt so good you had to do it again,and again, and again. OOOOOOOOOOFFFF!!!...UUUUUUUUULLLGGG!!!...OOOOUUUUFFFFF!!! You're totally enthralled by Carmen's lovely face and full pouting lip moaning and groaning out her agony as you drive your foot deeper and deeper into her soft sexy stomach. Finally you release her arms, and they wrap protectively around her battered belly. After a few minutes she looks slowly up at you, "...ooooh god thhha thha that was great Debbi. I never saw it coming." Warily you reach down and help her up. After a few more minutes she's able to straighten up. "So are you ready to do this for real girl?" She smiles at you're confused look and takes your hand, leading you into the bedroom. A large canopy-bed occupies part of the room. The floor is covered in plush carpet. All of the decor is in earth tones. It's rustic and feminine at the same time. Carmen walks up really close to you. So close that you can smell her sweet breath as she looks into your eyes. Then you feel her hands lightly slide up your thighs to your hips. Her fingers follow the top of your pants brushing your belly as they reach and unbutton your jeans. Her gentle touch moves up over your belly as she unbuttons you shirt. All the while her gleaming amber eyes never leave yours. She slowly slides your shirt off and your pants down. Then her hands come up your thighs again to your soft belly and go around your waist and behind your back. She places her palm onto your bare belly and begins to push you slowly backwards as she walks forward. After a few steps your back bumps into the wall. she takes first your left wrist and then your right and fastens them above your head in padded restraints that hang there. Then she steps back, like an artist admiring her work. Again she moves towards you, this time she makes a fist and slowly pushes it into your soft lower belly. Her eyes never leave your exposed stomach.

"Thats where you like it isn't it?" You can tell she doesn't expect you to answer. Then she pushes her fist into your belly harder...uunng. And harder...uuuuunnn. Then she throws a light punch and leaves her fist in your belly...uuuuugn! Her punches continue to get harder, and she always leaves her fist a little deeper in your soft belly . . . UUUUNNGG!...UUUUUULLLG!...OOOOOOOF!...OOOOOOOOOP!...OOOOOOUUF!...AAAAAUUUUUUHH!!...OOOOOOOUUUUFFFF!!!

You realize slowly that every punch is getting you more and more excited. Now she's punching you as hard as she can. She grunts with each swing, and her fist is driving deeper and deeper into you soft round lower belly. UUUUUUUUUULLLGG!!!...OOOOOOOOUUUUUFFF!!!...UUUUNNNNNNNNGG!!!...UUHHUUUUULLLLGGG!!! She punches your weak stomach again and again. Your legs give out and you sag against the wall vainly trying to gasp for breath before Carmen's fist gets buried in your vulnerable belly again. She starts throwing looping uppercuts into that weak spot just below your navel, and that's what finally does it for you . . .

UUUUUUUHHHH!!!...OOOOOUUUUUUFFF!!!...UUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGG!! She stands there watching your belly spasm and you moan in pleasure-pain with her hands on her hips. When you can finally breath again she smiles, " OK honey, now it's my turn.
that was like the first one all right for females but not males
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